Ok, I noticed my first story got low rankings. Now, I want to ask you guys how I could improve. Feel free to tell me or suggest anything I could do to make my stories[…]
Cameron in class
Cameron and I sat in class with our history teacher Mr Brooks. Only the three of us were present as the rest of the class had gone on a field trip with the other history[…]
Two prostitutes walking by church
TWO PROSTITUTES WALKING BY CHURCH Two prostitutes were walking by a church when one of them said to the other, "we should go inside. They've got a guy in there who's really hung!" "Tell me[…]
Black candles
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Night visit
Ryan stood in the doorway of his little sister’s room watching the sweet girl sleep. This was the third night in a row he had stood here with his hand down his boxers, thinking about[…]
My beautiful younger sister
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A dance to remember part-1
Ok, because this story is realised close to Valentines day, I decided to release a Valentines day story. This story begins as Alex, a 15 year old boy who is 5' 11" and lives in[…]
Away with unhappiness, hello happiness part 2
The next morning I awoke to the sound of running water and I looked up at the digital clock beside my bed then lied back staring at the ceiling thinking about last night and I[…]
The delivery guy
As i walk into your office you are on the phone and i look around and see it is just us there all alone. I prop in the door way waiting patiently for your phone[…]
Just for you daddy!
Part one; Dominick is a fifty-eight year old widowed male. He lives with his eighteen year old step-daughter Mandy. Ever since his wife Eve died his secret desire about wanting to have sex with Mandy[…]
School daze chapter 5
School Daze chapter 5 Richard and Linda sat across from each other in Mimi's restaurant sipping their coffee. They were both smiling, recalling how they had spent their morning. Every time Richard yawned, Linda would[…]
Helping out a friend
I took a promotion with my company that took me to the midwest. I had left my family and friends in a town that I grew up in. Once I settled in I began going[…]
Dan's dream part one
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Susan elaine
SUSAN ELAINE Susan Elaine Andersen! How she hated that name. There was nothing good about any part of it, not even a remote connection to the family of Andersen Windows. When she started school, the[…]
She’s married but not to me
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Night games
I grew up in at the edge of a fairly small town. From my house, 2 blocks to the north was marshland, 2 blocks west was fields, mostly corn. In my neighborhood there was a[…]